Ber12 Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
short self introduction email to co-workers
Hi,
Please help to give me some feedback and amendment to my self introduction email to co-colleagues. I noticed I been using too many "I" but I am unsure how to phrase my sentences in a more formal and interesting way. Please help, thank you!
Hi everyone,
My name is Adeline, my friends call me Adel. I have been hired as a Senior Officer and will be joining the team on 10th November.
Let me share a little bit more about myself. I had previously worked at ABC Ltd handling commercial operation for around 4years. Afterwhich, I have moved to XYZ Ltd as an Assistant Executive in industry operation. Along my way, I met several helpful people whom had given me ample guidance and allowed me to gain valuable skills and work experiences. With these transferable skills, I hope to continue contribute effectively to the team.
Beside work, I usually spend most of my time with my 6years old daughter and my family. I had never been away from home for more than a day until 2 months ago, I decided to fulfil my dream of a solo adventure to Taiwan. It was an amazing and fruitful experience. Next on my bucket list would be going for sky diving. If you have any recommendation or experience regarding sky dive, I'm all ears!
That's all for the little introduction about myself and I look forward to meeting everyone in person.
Thank you.
Best Regards,
Adeline
Please help to give me some feedback and amendment to my self introduction email to co-colleagues. I noticed I been using too many "I" but I am unsure how to phrase my sentences in a more formal and interesting way. Please help, thank you!
Hi everyone,
My name is Adeline, my friends call me Adel. I have been hired as a Senior Officer and will be joining the team on 10th November.
Let me share a little bit more about myself. I had previously worked at ABC Ltd handling commercial operation for around 4years. Afterwhich, I have moved to XYZ Ltd as an Assistant Executive in industry operation. Along my way, I met several helpful people whom had given me ample guidance and allowed me to gain valuable skills and work experiences. With these transferable skills, I hope to continue contribute effectively to the team.
Beside work, I usually spend most of my time with my 6years old daughter and my family. I had never been away from home for more than a day until 2 months ago, I decided to fulfil my dream of a solo adventure to Taiwan. It was an amazing and fruitful experience. Next on my bucket list would be going for sky diving. If you have any recommendation or experience regarding sky dive, I'm all ears!
That's all for the little introduction about myself and I look forward to meeting everyone in person.
Thank you.
Best Regards,
Adeline
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Hi everyone, My name is Adeline, my friends call me Adel. ) I have been hired as a Senior Officer and will be joining the team on 10th November. Let me share a little bit more about myself.
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Hi everyone,
My name is Adeline, my friends call me Adel. (Do you want these people to call you Adel?) I have been hired as a Senior Officer and will be joining the team on 10th November.
Let me share a little bit more about myself. Ihad previously worked at ABC Ltd handling commercial operations for around 4 years. After that, I worked at I
My name is Adeline, my friends call me Adel. (Do you want these people to call you Adel?) I have been hired as a Senior Officer and will be joining the team on 10th November.
Let me share a little bit more about myself. I
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Ber12co-colleaguesThat is incorrect. Use colleague http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/colleague or co-worker htt
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