Yoong Liat Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
short composition
0 Hi guys 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 Could someone please edit this short composition for me. Any suggestions are welcome.Thank you in advance. 02 b 02 br
02 br
00 Once a hare challenged a tortoise to a race. “Hey, Slowcoach, shall we have a race?" Although the tortoise was feeling hurt, it kept quiet. The hare continued, “Hey, are you a coward?” The tortoise finally agreed to the race although it knew it would lose. 02 br
02 br
00 They went to the starting point and the hare started the race by shouting, “One, two, three, go.” 00 00 Off it ran and was soon far away from the tortoise. The hare, seeing that the tortoise was too slow for it, decided to take a nap. 02 br
02 br
00 The tortoise continued walking slowly but steadily even after it passed the hare. It was near the ending point when the hare woke up and decided to catch up with the tortoise. But it was too late! 0-
02 br
01 b 00 Could someone please edit this short composition for me. Any suggestions are welcome.Thank you in advance. 02 b 02 br
02 br
00 Once a hare challenged a tortoise to a race. “Hey, Slowcoach, shall we have a race?" Although the tortoise was feeling hurt, it kept quiet. The hare continued, “Hey, are you a coward?” The tortoise finally agreed to the race although it knew it would lose. 02 br
02 br
00 They went to the starting point and the hare started the race by shouting, “One, two, three, go.” 00 00 Off it ran and was soon far away from the tortoise. The hare, seeing that the tortoise was too slow for it, decided to take a nap. 02 br
02 br
00 The tortoise continued walking slowly but steadily even after it passed the hare. It was near the ending point when the hare woke up and decided to catch up with the tortoise. But it was too late! 0-
Top answer
0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 Once a hare challenged a tortoise to a race. " Although the tortoise was hurt, it kept quiet. ” Off it ran and was soon far ahead.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
0
0 Hi, 02 br
02 br
01 font 00 Once a hare challenged a tortoise to a race. “Hey, Slowcoach, shall we have a race?" Although the tortoise was hurt, it kept quiet. The hare continued, “Hey, are you a coward?” The tortoise finally agreed to the race although it knew it would lose. 02 font 02 br
02 br
01 font 00 T
02 br
01 font 00 Once a hare challenged a tortoise to a race. “Hey, Slowcoach, shall we have a race?" Although the tortoise was hurt, it kept quiet. The hare continued, “Hey, are you a coward?” The tortoise finally agreed to the race although it knew it would lose. 02 font 02 br
02 br
01 font 00 T
00
0 Thanks, Clive, for your constructive comments and the corrections. 0-
0