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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Shiver dwon my spine

Which of the following sentences are acceptable? Which is better?

(1) The thought of the release of radiation from the Fukishima nuclear plant is causing everybody to panic.

(2) The thought of the release of radiation from the Fukishima nuclear plant and the havoc it will wreak, sends shivers down my spine.

(3) I shiver at the thought of the recent release of radiation from Fukishima.
  

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(1) The thought of the release of radiation from the Fukishima nuclear plant is causing everybody to panic. (2) The thought of the release of radiation from the Fukishima nuclear plant and the havoc it will wreak sends shivers down my spine. (3) I shiver at the thought of the recent release of radiation from Fukishima.

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(1) The thought of the release of radiation from the Fukishima nuclear plant is causing everybody to panic.

(2) The thought of the release of radiation from the Fukishima nuclear plant and the havoc it will wreak sends shivers down my spine.

(3) I shiver at the thought of the recent release of radiation from Fukishima.

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