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Fizzi Posted 18 years ago
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Hi all,
Can somebody please help me with the English?

Regards,
Fizzi

1- Studies conducted in all surveyed countries failed to provide any phamplets with no misleading claims.
2- Only 8% or less claims were unambiguous claims. Most studies provided information on quantitative results as Y. X and T were often absent.
3- Although the standards of the X code are rarely achieved, we believe our results indicate that regulations may do a different.
  

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Hi, My suggestions: 1- Studies conducted in all surveyed countries did not find any phamplets without misleading claims. 2- Less than 8% of claims were unambiguous. Most studies provided information on quantitative results.

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Hi,

My suggestions:

1- Studies conducted in all surveyed countries did not find any phamplets without misleading claims.
2- Less than 8% of claims were unambiguous. Most studies provided information on quantitative results. Y, X and T were often absent.
3- Although the standards of the X code are rarely achieved, we believe our results indicate that regulations may achi
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Hi El,

How about this?

Although the standards set for the promotional control are rarely achieved, we believe our results indicate that regulations may sensible in controlling the promotional activities.

Regards,
Fizzi