Christine Christie Posted 5 years ago
Grammar
Sentences
Are these sentences correct:
a) "Aboard his boat, the fisherman departed to fulfill his trade."
b) "The fisherman boarded his boat, and departed to fulfill his trade."
Top answer
" The grammar is fine. The word choice seems a little too flowery for the subject matter. CJ
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Christine ChristieAre these sentences correct:
a) "Aboard his boat, the fisherman departed to fulfill his trade."
b) "The fisherman boarded his boat [no comma] and departed to fulfill his trade."
The grammar is fine. The word choice seems a little too flowery for t
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