Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Sentence structure check
I would be highly thankful, if anyone correct this following sentence:
Effective application of these activities is, therefore, needed in our day-to-day lives to survive in a better environment.
Thanking u,
PK
Effective application of these activities is, therefore, needed in our day-to-day lives to survive in a better environment.
Thanking u,
PK
Top answer
Effective execution of these activities is, therefore, needed in our day-to-day lives to survive in a better environment. It is still formal and somewhat awkward, but I don't know what you are trying to express. Are these activities necessary for human survival and to improve the environment?
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Effective execution of these activities is, therefore, needed in our day-to-day lives to survive in a better environment.
It is still formal and somewhat awkward, but I don't know what you are trying to express. Are these activities necessary for human survival and to improve the environment? Informal:
We need to perform these activiti
It is still formal and somewhat awkward, but I don't know what you are trying to express. Are these activities necessary for human survival and to improve the environment? Informal:
We need to perform these activiti
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