Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Vocabulary
Sentence sounds un-pro for a resume
Could you please check if the below sentence is correct grammatically, can you suggest a better one:
"I believe IT developers have so far made a big change in our lives, they will continue to do so and Id still like to be part of that."
"I believe IT developers have so far made a big change in our lives, they will continue to do so and Id still like to be part of that."
Top answer
One grammatical error, highlighted. " You are right that it is not high on a scale of professional quality.
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One grammatical error, highlighted.
"I believe IT developers have so far made a big change in our lives, they will continue to do so and Id still like to be part of that."
You are right that it is not high on a scale of professional quality.
"I believe IT developers have so far made a big change in our lives, they will continue to do so and Id still like to be part of that."
You are right that it is not high on a scale of professional quality.
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Thank you, please I would like to hear better suggestions to use
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"I believe IT developers have so far made a big change in our lives because we earn good salaries. The salaries will continue to grow and that's why I'd like to be continue being part of that group."
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