Ryansamturner Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Sentence Review
Hi,
I have a couple of sentences, but not sure if they make sense.
'They were my blades, my shaving blades, from the days when I used to actually care about my appearance.'
I am not sure whether it is better to rearrange this as such:
'They were my blades, my shaving blades, from the days when I actually used to care about my appearance.'
I have a couple of sentences, but not sure if they make sense.
'They were my blades, my shaving blades, from the days when I used to actually care about my appearance.'
I am not sure whether it is better to rearrange this as such:
'They were my blades, my shaving blades, from the days when I actually used to care about my appearance.'
Top answer
You asked this same question back on September 13 . "Razor blades" is usual, not "shaving blades". As for your reordering, it hardly matters stylistically, since the understood meaning is the same, and "actually" is flabby, anyway.
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You asked this same question back on September 13.
"Razor blades" is usual, not "shaving blades". As for your reordering, it hardly matters stylistically, since the understood meaning is the same, and "actually" is flabby, anyway. I think I would use the second i
"Razor blades" is usual, not "shaving blades". As for your reordering, it hardly matters stylistically, since the understood meaning is the same, and "actually" is flabby, anyway. I think I would use the second i
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Apologies, I forgot that I'd already asked.
Thanks for the comments.
Thanks for the comments.
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