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Grammar
Sentence Mechanics
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Instructions: Revise the sentence(s) to make them grammatically correct, if necessary. You may need to fix several aspects.
I like sunny days, however its cloudy today.
Revision: I like sunny days, however it’s cloudy today.
We will have a fun time today, we are going to the zoo.
Revision: We will have a fun time today at the zoo.
The parent’s all met at the party.
Revision: The parents all met at the party.
The new car has many safety features it features air bags and passive restraints.
Revision: The new car has many safety features, including airbags and passive restraints.
I can fix the light, the parts are all here.
Revision: I can fix the light, since the parts are all here.
Instructions: Revise the sentence(s) to make them grammatically correct, if necessary. You may need to fix several aspects.
I like sunny days, however its cloudy today.
Revision: I like sunny days, however it’s cloudy today.
We will have a fun time today, we are going to the zoo.
Revision: We will have a fun time today at the zoo.
The parent’s all met at the party.
Revision: The parents all met at the party.
The new car has many safety features it features air bags and passive restraints.
Revision: The new car has many safety features, including airbags and passive restraints.
I can fix the light, the parts are all here.
Revision: I can fix the light, since the parts are all here.
Top answer
I like sunny days, however its cloudy today. Revision: I like sunny days . H owever , it’s cloudy today.
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I like sunny days, however its cloudy today.
Revision: I like sunny days. However, it’s cloudy today.
As a conjunction, however can be used in this sense: You won't succeed however hard you try.
Revision: I like sunny days. However, it’s cloudy today.
As a conjunction, however can be used in this sense: You won't succeed however hard you try.
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