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Looking for a role as license practical nurse in a reputable company to retire with and will also give me a challenging position in a busy facility or home care where my extensive medical professional and practical experience will be fully utilized.

Q: Is this sentence wrote correct? Using as an objective on resume.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

AnonymousLooking for a role as licensed practical nurse in a reputable company to retire with and will also give me a challenging position in a busy facility or home care where my extensive medical professional and practical experience will be fully utilized.
Q: Is this sentence wrote correct? Using as an objective on resume.

This is not a well-written sentence. Here is a re-write

I am looking for a career position (Career implies something long-term. These days nobody will promise you a job until you decide to retire. A carreer position also implies that your employer will be a reputable institution.) as a licensed practical nurse in a home care situation or an institution where I can apply my extensive professional experience to full advantage.

Clive · Answer

Hi,

Looking for a role as license practical nurse in a reputable company to retire with and will also give me a challenging position in a busy facility or home care where my extensive medical professional and practical experience will be fully utilized.

Q: Is this sentence wrote correct? Using as an objective on resume.

I suggest this.

Looking for a challenging position as a licensed practical nurse with a reputable company in a busy facility or home care, where my extensive medical, professional and practical experience will be fully utilized.

I don't know what you mean by 'to retire with'.

Clive

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