kindly find below letter, i would like to know your suggestion and correction?
Dear Mr. Name,
I enjoy working here and appreciate the challenges that my position provides me every day. Though I am grateful for the professional opportunities the company offers me.
Soon I will be in the lovely cage of marriage. As you know, this entails additional obligations. I wish to request for a xx,000 as a salary loan. I require this loan to prepare for my mirage which will help me do some necessary stuff (Furniture, marriage party, etc).
I have evaluated all my options and decided to apply for a salary loan as i can’t get an Islamic loan due to company restriction of salary transfer (as I can transfer them to XXX bank or XXX bank only) which both are not an Islamic bank. Also, i would like you to know that I will be able to payback this loan in 2 years.
Your’s Sincerely,
My Name
designation
payroll
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dabash—and welcome to English Forums. Dear Mr. [surname], I enjoy working here and appreciate the challenges that my position provides me every day .
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Hello, murad.dabash—and welcome to English Forums.
Dear Mr. [surname],
I enjoy working here and appreciate the challenges that my position provides me every day. I am grateful for the professional opportunities the company offers me.
Soon I will be married, and as you know, this entails additional obligations. I wish to request xx