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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Rooms

For a description of a reservation page on a hotel website,
Which sentence sounds more natural?

Limited Time Sale
1)A twin room or superior room is selectable depending on availability.
2)A twin room or superior room can be selected depending on availability.
3)A twin room or superior room is selectable, subject to availability.
4)A twin room or superior room can be selected, subject to availability.
  

Top answer

2 and 4 sound more natural. The word 'sale' is odd: they aren't selling the rooms. 'Offer' would be better.

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4 Answers
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2 and 4 sound more natural.

The word 'sale' is odd: they aren't selling the rooms. 'Offer' would be better.

Also, the terms of the offer need to be stipulated – such as 'free upgrades from standard rooms'.
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Thank you very much for your comment.
If the terms of the offer is stipulated elsewhere,
which of the above sentence is best?
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>>2 and 4 sound more natural.>>
I missed that.
You have already answered my questions.
Thank you very much.