Nikitus Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Ron is upset in his apartment for what happeneda few hours earlier
In the sentence "Ron is upset in his apartment for what happeneda few hours earlier" is the grammar correct?
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Ron is upset in his apartment for what happened a few hours earlier The upset in his apartment phrase does not work well. It seems to give too much importance to the fact that he is in his apartment. I suggest eg Ron, who is in his apartment, is upset over/about what happened a few hours earlier.
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Ron is upset in his apartment for what happened a few hours earlier
The upset in his apartment phrase does not work well. It seems to give too much importance to the fact that he is in his apartment.
I suggest
eg Ron, who is in his apartment, is upset over/about what
The upset in his apartment phrase does not work well. It seems to give too much importance to the fact that he is in his apartment.
I suggest
eg Ron, who is in his apartment, is upset over/about what
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