Car panda 856 Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Rewrite sentence in a formal way

I want to rewrite this sentence in a more formal way. It is my thesis statement for an essay.

"I will tell you about how all my learning experience, since Pre-School and all the way through High School, got me to be the literate person I am today."

  

Top answer

It's not really a thesis statement. A thesis statement is something that you are going to argue and prove that it is a true statement. My education has made me a very literate person.

Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0

It's not really a thesis statement. A thesis statement is something that you are going to argue and prove that it is a true statement.

My education has made me a very literate person. (That's not saying a lot; literate means that you can read and write.)

Perhaps you want something more like this:

Step by step over my school years, I have learned to / appreciat