Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Review a terrible situation
It is easy to describe my best friend, so, I am going to tell you something else. a terrible situation that happened with my friend and I. One year ago, one morning, we were going into work, once we arrived there, we found something strange had happened. The lights, the windows, and the doors were broken. "What is going on?" My friend Ahmed said. I had no idea, I did not know what I had to say. The papers scattered and the general view was chaos everywhere. Ultimately, we had to ask someone because the situation was so far-fetched. So we called our boss. " This is an earthquake" Our boss said. Alongside his speaking, the building was shaking. Timely, we realized that there was an earthquake! We have been working there for two years. I did not imagine that earthquake could make as effect as what happened, did you ?!! The building was shaking like in the cartoon with out falling. It is really hard to explain, but it was like shift to the right and then shift to the left. Amazing
Review please and tell me my mistakes!!
Review please and tell me my mistakes!!
Top answer
with my friend and me going to work; (avoid run-on sentence) I did not know what to say The papers were scattered our boss (no capital letter) While he was speaking timely Finally/at last earthquake couold do as much damage as that Did you? (new sentence)
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with my friend and me
going to work; (avoid run-on sentence)
I did not know what to say
The papers were scattered
our boss (no capital letter)
While he was speaking
timely Finally/at last
earthquake couold do as much damage as that
Did you? (new sentence)
going to work; (avoid run-on sentence)
I did not know what to say
The papers were scattered
our boss (no capital letter)
While he was speaking
earthquake couold do as much damage as that
Did you? (new sentence)
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