Chowbarry Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Request for a repair work
Please help me correct the following e-mail. Thank you.
Dear Mr. Whittle,
We write to solicit your assistance to repair a defective drop bar located at the entrance of car park of our office building. Recently, the tenderer of the car park has lodged a complaint to us, accusing those drop bars of having a large crack at its base and failing to drop down after lifting for weeks, which cause significant disturbances to their daily management of the car park, particularly leading to a number of vehicles leave the car park without paying parking fees.
Since our office is committed to provide the authorized tenderer with an normally functioning drop bar in accordance with the tender agreement, please assist us to carry out a repair work on the defective drop bar as soon as possible. Moreover, as the next term of tender exercise of car park commences on 1 Oct 2016, we hope you can finalize the repair work before then. We look forward to hearing your comment on our requested repair work by 23 June 2016. Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
TM
Dear Mr. Whittle,
We write to solicit your assistance to repair a defective drop bar located at the entrance of car park of our office building. Recently, the tenderer of the car park has lodged a complaint to us, accusing those drop bars of having a large crack at its base and failing to drop down after lifting for weeks, which cause significant disturbances to their daily management of the car park, particularly leading to a number of vehicles leave the car park without paying parking fees.
Since our office is committed to provide the authorized tenderer with an normally functioning drop bar in accordance with the tender agreement, please assist us to carry out a repair work on the defective drop bar as soon as possible. Moreover, as the next term of tender exercise of car park commences on 1 Oct 2016, we hope you can finalize the repair work before then. We look forward to hearing your comment on our requested repair work by 23 June 2016. Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
TM
Top answer
chowbarry the tenderer of the car park What does that mean? chowbarry those drop bars of having a large crack at its base You refer to just one drop bar above! Also, what does "its" refer to?
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chowbarrythe tenderer of the car parkWhat does that mean?
chowbarrythose drop bars of having a large crack at its baseYou refer to just one drop bar above!
Also, what does "its" refer to?
By "drop bar", do you mean "entrance/exit barrier?"
chowbarryfailing to drop down after lifting for wee
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teechr, the tenderer of the car park means the management company of the car park.
those drop bars of having a large crack at its base refers to there is a crack at the base of the drop bar.
Yes, there should be one drop bar there and drop bar means entrance/exit barrier.
failing to drop down after lifting for weeks means the entrance/exit barrier fails to drop down afte
those drop bars of having a large crack at its base refers to there is a crack at the base of the drop bar.
Yes, there should be one drop bar there and drop bar means entrance/exit barrier.
failing to drop down after lifting for weeks means the entrance/exit barrier fails to drop down afte
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