A company has sent me the following email to arrange a telephone interview with me. I've written the answer but I'd be really grateful if someone could check it. I find that my answer is too abrupt and I believe that what they want with this email is to check my English. I don't want to sound pompous either. Thanks a lot for your help!
I am delighted to receive your invitation for a telephone interview. Tuesday 2nd November at 11:00 am would suit me best. My telephone number is XXXXXX.
It looks fine. For the salutation I would say Dear Sir or Madam: Typically it is one person receiving your response, so singular is better. If you know who it is, use their name.
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It looks fine. For the salutation I would say Dear Sir or Madam: Typically it is one person receiving your response, so singular is better. If you know who it is, use their name.