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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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0I want to direct my remarks here to three angles that we need to address in a triangle of challenges 01b00and02b00 that I think present themselves to us as we take a step into the future, away from the five years that have passed since September 11.02br
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00Can 01b00and 02b00be inserted or please suggest some punctuation changes in the above sentence. 02br
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00The first is the appearance, in the last century, in each of the traditions, of what some refer to as a fundamentalist movement, a fundamentalist wing, that is, a strong 01b00a02b00 reaction against interfaith dialogue, which is viewed as a lethal danger to the integrity of the faith.02br
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00Can the 01b00a 02b00be deleted? Please advise.0-
  

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02font 02br 02br 01font 00Can 01b 00and 02b 00be inserted or please suggest some punctuation changes in the above sentence. 02font 02br 02br 00 I think your sentence above needs rewording. It contains too much, and thus lacks focus.

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