Mutaz Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Re:Letter of interest to master degree
would you please help me in revising this latter of interest if possible
To Home It Concern
Dear Sir or Madam:
My purpose to study this master’s *** corresponds well with my future desire to acquire knowledge and competencies in ** and it is impact in my community. It is my ambition to be admitting, and pursue my postgraduate studies in the field of ** and gain advance knowledge and competencies on politics and management of HIV/AIDS prgrammes, mainstreaming of ** for professional work.
My desire to study in the area of ** reflects my interests in contemporary ** issues, with a particular focus on policy, politics and management of ** programmes. I want to gain broader understanding in mainstreaming of **, inclusion and mobilization of groups and communities, and building institutional and workplace capacity. Furthermore, I am interested in better training in ** impact assessment and related research.
During my work in the *****, then in ****, I became interested in ** through community work. In addition to my experiences, I have ability in work with ** education programmes as well as implementing different trainings on ** education. During my training experience, I have acquired list of competencies including the capacity to develop and manage a training or education programme on ** education, while simultaneously applying quality criteria. I am willing to continue my work in ** education field and I would love to contribute to Advocacy, Training and Education program.
During my study period in *******, and as part of training is to deal with community, I acquired knowledge and skills in communication and dealing with the community problem and solve it in systematic base.
As a committed, thoughtful and hard-working person with experience in *** activism and willingness to work for *****, I believe that I am a good candidate for the Master’s Program in Human Rights.
Your sincerely,,,,,,,,,
To Home It Concern
Dear Sir or Madam:
My purpose to study this master’s *** corresponds well with my future desire to acquire knowledge and competencies in ** and it is impact in my community. It is my ambition to be admitting, and pursue my postgraduate studies in the field of ** and gain advance knowledge and competencies on politics and management of HIV/AIDS prgrammes, mainstreaming of ** for professional work.
My desire to study in the area of ** reflects my interests in contemporary ** issues, with a particular focus on policy, politics and management of ** programmes. I want to gain broader understanding in mainstreaming of **, inclusion and mobilization of groups and communities, and building institutional and workplace capacity. Furthermore, I am interested in better training in ** impact assessment and related research.
During my work in the *****, then in ****, I became interested in ** through community work. In addition to my experiences, I have ability in work with ** education programmes as well as implementing different trainings on ** education. During my training experience, I have acquired list of competencies including the capacity to develop and manage a training or education programme on ** education, while simultaneously applying quality criteria. I am willing to continue my work in ** education field and I would love to contribute to Advocacy, Training and Education program.
During my study period in *******, and as part of training is to deal with community, I acquired knowledge and skills in communication and dealing with the community problem and solve it in systematic base.
As a committed, thoughtful and hard-working person with experience in *** activism and willingness to work for *****, I believe that I am a good candidate for the Master’s Program in Human Rights.
Your sincerely,,,,,,,,,
Top answer
Hi mutaz; Please use the "W" icon to paste from WORD, otherwise, you get a lot of gibberish in the posting. Your letter had too many *** entries for me to make sense of many parts of it, so I cannot do a proper job of suggesting changes. I have highlighted areas that need attention.
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Hi mutaz;
Please use the "W" icon to paste from WORD, otherwise, you get a lot of gibberish in the posting. Your letter had too many *** entries for me to make sense of many parts of it, so I cannot do a proper job of suggesting changes. I have highlighted areas that need attention.
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Would you please help me in revising
Please use the "W" icon to paste from WORD, otherwise, you get a lot of gibberish in the posting. Your letter had too many *** entries for me to make sense of many parts of it, so I cannot do a proper job of suggesting changes. I have highlighted areas that need attention.
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Would you please help me in revising
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