Mandrious Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Reference Letter
Hi my friend just wrote me a reference letter could you please correct her where she went wrong.
Nomvula Shabalala
Plot 69
Driefontien Road
Muldersdrift
1747
3 January 2012
To whom may it concern
As a friend for Fatima family.I have had the pleasure of knowing Fatima since she was born.
She has been an outstanding student since the first grade.I strongly recommend her as a recipient of your bursary award.
I am sure that Fatima will continue in her studies.She is a dedicated student and her grades have been consistently exemplary.She always shows great initiative and diligence.She is able to develop intelligent plans and implement then
successfully.She follows instructions,aims to please,work independently and is a self-starter.
She has demonstrated admirable leadership skills.Many have shared with me their appreciation of her pleasant encouraging attitude.For these reasons.I highly recommend Fatima.Because of her drive to succeed,proven abilities,and impressive academic achievements,Fatima is a wealthy candidate for the bursary.If you have any questions regarding Fatima character or achievements,please do not hesitate to contact me.:079 1820 342
Sincerely yours
Nomvula Shabalala
Nomvula Shabalala
Plot 69
Driefontien Road
Muldersdrift
1747
3 January 2012
To whom may it concern
As a friend for Fatima family.I have had the pleasure of knowing Fatima since she was born.
She has been an outstanding student since the first grade.I strongly recommend her as a recipient of your bursary award.
I am sure that Fatima will continue in her studies.She is a dedicated student and her grades have been consistently exemplary.She always shows great initiative and diligence.She is able to develop intelligent plans and implement then
successfully.She follows instructions,aims to please,work independently and is a self-starter.
She has demonstrated admirable leadership skills.Many have shared with me their appreciation of her pleasant encouraging attitude.For these reasons.I highly recommend Fatima.Because of her drive to succeed,proven abilities,and impressive academic achievements,Fatima is a wealthy candidate for the bursary.If you have any questions regarding Fatima character or achievements,please do not hesitate to contact me.:079 1820 342
Sincerely yours
Nomvula Shabalala
Top answer
I have had the pleasure of knowing Fatima since she was born. I strongly recommend her as a recipient of your bursary award. I am sure that Fatima will continue (making excellent progress) in her studies.
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To whom may it concern
As a (close) friend of Fatima's family,.I have had the pleasure of knowing Fatima since she was born.
She has been an outstanding student since the first grade.I strongly recommend her as a recipient of your bursary award.
I am sure that Fatima will continue (making excellent progress) in her studies. She is a dedicated st
As a (close) friend of Fatima's family,.I have had the pleasure of knowing Fatima since she was born.
She has been an outstanding student since the first grade.I strongly recommend her as a recipient of your bursary award.
I am sure that Fatima will continue (making excellent progress) in her studies. She is a dedicated st
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