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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Redundant sentence?

In the 153 cases of M-ECWMPC, the 103 patients who had received surgery (at least one primary carcinoma surgery resection) had a better survival time than the 38 patients who only received RoC, though this is a poorer survival time than the time for those 3633 EC patients who were operated on.


This sentence seems a little strange to me. What do you think? Thanks.

  

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anonymous This sentence seems a little strange to me. What do you think? It's OK.

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anonymousThis sentence seems a little strange to me. What do you think?

It's OK. I'd do this:

In the 153 cases of M-ECWMPC, the 103 patients who had received at least one primary carcinoma surgery resection survived longer than the 38 patients who only received RoC, though thi