D_say Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Quick Intro Letter !!!
Please review the letter a established firm has to request for pre qualify for next tenders. The company has not much experience except little outdoor advertising services and distribution. In order to achieve the tender we need to introduce ourselves as a trader. Now Please assist me with your kind assistance.
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The Director,
ABC Org
1234
Dear Sir,
We are pleased to introduce about Gazy Enterprise. Our company is established in 1998, since then we have been in the field of distribution, and outdoor advertising. We have achieved a good market share in order to provide excellent services and that is the core value of our organization to enhance our business relationships.
As ABC organization aims to manage the existing fertilizer plants and also to establish additional fertilizer production facilities in the country in public sector. We hereby assure you the quality services and availability of stock in time. If an opportunity is given to us we will not leave any stone unturned.
We are looking forward to your kind consideration and obliged.
Thank you,
Sincerely,
A. Deee
Director
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The Director,
ABC Org
1234
Dear Sir,
We are pleased to introduce about Gazy Enterprise. Our company is established in 1998, since then we have been in the field of distribution, and outdoor advertising. We have achieved a good market share in order to provide excellent services and that is the core value of our organization to enhance our business relationships.
As ABC organization aims to manage the existing fertilizer plants and also to establish additional fertilizer production facilities in the country in public sector. We hereby assure you the quality services and availability of stock in time. If an opportunity is given to us we will not leave any stone unturned.
We are looking forward to your kind consideration and obliged.
Thank you,
Sincerely,
A. Deee
Director
Top answer
The letter is good d_say. But its too short for the other Firm to get to know about your company. Your intro letter should have all the details about your share market status, your profit and loss ratio evrything.
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The letter is good d_say.
But its too short for the other Firm to get to know about your company.
Your intro letter should have all the details about your share market status, your profit and loss ratio evrything.
So that the other Firm can get to know about your company in one Snap Shot.
But its too short for the other Firm to get to know about your company.
Your intro letter should have all the details about your share market status, your profit and loss ratio evrything.
So that the other Firm can get to know about your company in one Snap Shot.
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We are pleased to introduce "you" about Gazy Enterprise
and give some more historical background about the company,
and make it more impressive so it could get a good look for your client. or to anybody who could read it
and give some more historical background about the company,
and make it more impressive so it could get a good look for your client. or to anybody who could read it
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Hello d_say.. Well your letter is good.
But its too short for the other Firm to get to know about your company.
Your Intro Letter should have all the information about your company right from its status in share market, profit and loss ratio of the last decade, etc..
Your Intro Letter should be such that the other party can get to know about your company in one Snap Sho
But its too short for the other Firm to get to know about your company.
Your Intro Letter should have all the information about your company right from its status in share market, profit and loss ratio of the last decade, etc..
Your Intro Letter should be such that the other party can get to know about your company in one Snap Sho
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[D]renktsin Thank you,
So kind and grateful to you for your quick response in this regard.
Moreover, I am not able to put more light on the background because the firm is new in operation. Since the establishment of the firm it has not been in much business activities. This is a drawback....
Thanks n Warm regards renktsin
So kind and grateful to you for your quick response in this regard.
Moreover, I am not able to put more light on the background because the firm is new in operation. Since the establishment of the firm it has not been in much business activities. This is a drawback....
Thanks n Warm regards renktsin
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