Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Proofreading?
Hi teachers, please help me correct my email if there are any mistakes.
Thank You!
To: John
From: Sally
Date: 10 October 2016
Subject: Presentation Feedback
Dear John,
I got some feedback concerning your conference presentation last week.
Firstly, the introduction was excellent, but the case study you analyzed seemed a bit lengthy. Could you shorten it next time?
Secondly, the slides were good and the graphs made your points vivid and interesting. However, I think it is necessary to use larger font in a big hall to ensure everyone can see the contents clearly.
Furthermore, you should avoid getting in front of the screen because some participants said they could not see what you referred to. So, please make sure not to block the audiences’ view.
Finally, your voice was clear and you looked confident. Nevertheless, you should think about your body language; you don’t need to stand still during a presentation, but avoid too much movement.
I hope these suggestions and feedback are helpful to you.
Regards,
Sally
Thank You!
To: John
From: Sally
Date: 10 October 2016
Subject: Presentation Feedback
Dear John,
I got some feedback concerning your conference presentation last week.
Firstly, the introduction was excellent, but the case study you analyzed seemed a bit lengthy. Could you shorten it next time?
Secondly, the slides were good and the graphs made your points vivid and interesting. However, I think it is necessary to use larger font in a big hall to ensure everyone can see the contents clearly.
Furthermore, you should avoid getting in front of the screen because some participants said they could not see what you referred to. So, please make sure not to block the audiences’ view.
Finally, your voice was clear and you looked confident. Nevertheless, you should think about your body language; you don’t need to stand still during a presentation, but avoid too much movement.
I hope these suggestions and feedback are helpful to you.
Regards,
Sally
Top answer
nekosama to use larger font Can you spot the mistake in the above? nekosama some participants said they could not see what you were presenting. referred to.
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nekosamato use larger fontCan you spot the mistake in the above?
nekosamasome participants said they could not see what you were presenting.referred to.So, please make sure not to block the audience view.
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No, because we're not talking about one specific/particular font. Try once more. 
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Dear John,
I have some feedback for you regarding your conference presentation last week.
First, the introduction was excellent, but the case study you analyzed seemed a bit lengthy. Could you shorten it next time?
Second, the slides were good and the graphs made your points vivid and interesting. However, I think it is necessary to use a larger
I have some feedback for you regarding your conference presentation last week.
First, the introduction was excellent, but the case study you analyzed seemed a bit lengthy. Could you shorten it next time?
Second, the slides were good and the graphs made your points vivid and interesting. However, I think it is necessary to use a larger
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