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To: Amy Johnson
From: Sue Bentley
Date: October 10th
Subject: Seminar Arrangement
Dear Amy,
Further to next Thursday’s seminar, I would like to make several changes on it.
Firstly, as I told you before, the provisional title of the seminar was ‘Dealing with Overseas Clients’, I would like to change it to 'International Communication' instead.
Secondly, I have seen the rooms you commended. The presentation room is well-designed, but it is too small for all twenty participants. So I chose the boardroom finally.
Moreover, please photocopy the slides by the end of this week, and fax copies of feedback form to every participant as soon as possible.
Finally, I need one of the books which I lent you last week back for the seminar. The one I want is “Global Partnership”.
Don’t hesitate to call me if you have any problems.
Sue
To: Amy Johnson
From: Sue Bentley
Date: October 10th
Subject: Seminar Arrangement
Dear Amy,
Further to next Thursday’s seminar, I would like to make several changes on it.
Firstly, as I told you before, the provisional title of the seminar was ‘Dealing with Overseas Clients’, I would like to change it to 'International Communication' instead.
Secondly, I have seen the rooms you commended. The presentation room is well-designed, but it is too small for all twenty participants. So I chose the boardroom finally.
Moreover, please photocopy the slides by the end of this week, and fax copies of feedback form to every participant as soon as possible.
Finally, I need one of the books which I lent you last week back for the seminar. The one I want is “Global Partnership”.
Don’t hesitate to call me if you have any problems.
Sue
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Dear Amy,
Further [ "Further" is used to refer to past events.] With regards to next Thursday’s seminar, there are several changes that I would like to make. several changes on it.
Firstly, as I told you before, the provisional title of the seminar was "Dealing with Overseas Clien
Firstly, as I told you before, the provisional title of the seminar was "Dealing with Overseas Clien
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