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To: Sandy Ellis
From: Mary Parsons
Date: October 6, 2011
Subject: Machine Mistake
Dear Ms. Ellis,
Your company has installed computerized cutting tools and packing machines in our Dispatch Department last Monday, on October 1, 2011.
The last one, a packing machine, is recently developed a fault. The measurements and materials for the boxes are all right, but there is some sort of problem with the box assembly mechanism. The boxes are weak, and goods get damaged.
Could you please ask the Customer Services Manager if he has time to call in and look at the situation today?
We will appreciate it if you get an engineer out to our firm tomorrow morning.
Regards,
Mary Parsons
Sales Manager
Jessica Technology Ltd
To: Sandy Ellis
From: Mary Parsons
Date: October 6, 2011
Subject: Machine Mistake
Dear Ms. Ellis,
Your company has installed computerized cutting tools and packing machines in our Dispatch Department last Monday, on October 1, 2011.
The last one, a packing machine, is recently developed a fault. The measurements and materials for the boxes are all right, but there is some sort of problem with the box assembly mechanism. The boxes are weak, and goods get damaged.
Could you please ask the Customer Services Manager if he has time to call in and look at the situation today?
We will appreciate it if you get an engineer out to our firm tomorrow morning.
Regards,
Mary Parsons
Sales Manager
Jessica Technology Ltd
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To: Sandy Ellis From: Mary Parsons Date: 6 October 6, 2011 Subject: Machine Mistake Dear Ms. Ellis, Your company has installed computerized cutting tools and packing machines in our Dispatch Department last Monday, on 1 October 1, 2011. The last one to be installed , a packing machine, is has recently developed a fault.
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To: Sandy Ellis
From: Mary Parsons
Date: 6 October6, 2011
Subject: Machine Mistake
Dear Ms. Ellis,
Your companyhas installed computerized cutting tools and packing machines in our Dispatch Department last Monday, on 1 October 1, 2011.
The last one to be installed, a packing machine,is
From: Mary Parsons
Date: 6 October
Subject: Machine Mistake
Dear Ms. Ellis,
Your company
The last one to be installed, a packing machine,
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