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To: The Head of Human Resources
Subject: The permission to the Business English Course
BACKGROUND
One of the employees of my department, Mr. Stone, has been given an offer of a 3-month Business English Course in London and he is asking for permission to go there. The course starts on January 20th, 2011. Obviously, Mr. Stone will be absent from work during this time.
THE COURSE CONTENTS
The participants of the course will get an opportunity to learn a wide range of business related vocabulary and be taught how to deal with business correspondences professionally. What’s more, several lectures and workshops concerning new business methods are included in the contents of the course.
SKILLED EMPLOYEES AS A FACTOR OF DEVELOPMENT
Mr. Stone is a young employee, but he has already proved to be very determined and to have outstanding interpersonal skills. He has been working with us for two years. At present we do not have employees with knowledge of business English in our company. An employee with such skills will give us a chance to develop our contacts with overseas customers and suppliers.
PROBLEMS TO BE OVERCOME
Mr. Stone will be absent from work for 3 months. The way to solve this problem can be employing someone as a replacement for this period. We are looking for people in other departments in the company, so if the person is good at his job, we can transfer him to another department later.
Please be prepared to give feedback on this proposal at the meeting next Monday.
To: The Head of Human Resources
Subject: The permission to the Business English Course
BACKGROUND
One of the employees of my department, Mr. Stone, has been given an offer of a 3-month Business English Course in London and he is asking for permission to go there. The course starts on January 20th, 2011. Obviously, Mr. Stone will be absent from work during this time.
THE COURSE CONTENTS
The participants of the course will get an opportunity to learn a wide range of business related vocabulary and be taught how to deal with business correspondences professionally. What’s more, several lectures and workshops concerning new business methods are included in the contents of the course.
SKILLED EMPLOYEES AS A FACTOR OF DEVELOPMENT
Mr. Stone is a young employee, but he has already proved to be very determined and to have outstanding interpersonal skills. He has been working with us for two years. At present we do not have employees with knowledge of business English in our company. An employee with such skills will give us a chance to develop our contacts with overseas customers and suppliers.
PROBLEMS TO BE OVERCOME
Mr. Stone will be absent from work for 3 months. The way to solve this problem can be employing someone as a replacement for this period. We are looking for people in other departments in the company, so if the person is good at his job, we can transfer him to another department later.
Please be prepared to give feedback on this proposal at the meeting next Monday.
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What was the prompt for you to write the above? Were you asked to write a letter, a report or something else?
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What was the prompt for you to write the above?
Were you asked to write a letter, a report or something else?
Were you asked to write a letter, a report or something else?
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teechrDo you have the full question/prompt?A member of your department wants permission to take a course which will mean he or she will be absent form work for a long period of time. Write a proposal to your line manager recommending that the person be allowed to take the course.
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To: The Head of Human Resources
Subject:The Permission to the for Business-English Course
BACKGROUND
One of the employeesof in my department, Mr. Stone, has been given an offered of a place on a 3-month business-English course in London, and he is asking f
Subject:
BACKGROUND
One of the employees
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