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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Metro Daily for a news reporter on Monday, March, 1st. I graduated with a Bachelor’s degree in Journalism in 2015. Not only do I have the qualification for this position, but I also have the right personality for a reporter. I am outgoing, optimism and good at communicating with people. I have some experiences in broadcasting and hosting in my university as well. In addition to the required courses of my major, I also minored in Japanese, Computer Science and Business in university. I have enclosed my resume that outlines in detail my qualifications and experiences as well as an open letter of recommendation from Hong Kong University. Please give me a feedback in your earliest convenience if my qualifications meet your requirement. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Mary Smith
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Metro Daily for a news reporter on Monday, March, 1st. I graduated with a Bachelor’s degree in Journalism in 2015. Not only do I have the qualification for this position, but I also have the right personality for a reporter.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Metro Daily for a news reporter on Monday, March, 1st. I graduated with a Bachelor’s degree in Journalism in 2015. Not only do I have the qualification for this position, but I also have the right personality for a reporter. I am outgoing, optimism and good at commu
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Metro Daily for a news reporter on Monday, March, 1st. I graduated with a Bachelor’s degree in Journalism in 2015. Not only do I have the qualification for this position, but I also have the right personality for a reporter. I am outgoing, optimistic and good at communicating with people. I ha