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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

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Hi Teachers,
Please help correct my letter if there are any grammatical mistakes. Thank you!

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Dear John,

I am writing to discuss with you about the plan that we will see a film this Saturday.

As for me, I have a fancy for romantic movies, because they touch me deeply. Alice told me that the movie which I have been expecting for years will be released these days.

What kind of movies would you like? Or do you mind watching the romantic movie with me? Give me a reply as soon as possible.
I will meet you at the gate of the Central City Cinema at 19:00 on Saturday.

I am looking forward to seeing you.
Yours Truly,
Mary
  

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Dear John, I am writing to discuss with you about the plan that what film we will see a film this Saturday. As for me, I have a fancy for romantic movie s because they touch me deeply. Alice told me that the movie which I have been expecting for years eager to see for weeks will be released these days.

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Dear John,

I am writing to discuss with you about the plan that what film we will see a film this Saturday.

As for me, I have a fancy for romantic movies because they touch me deeply. Alice told me that the movie which I have been expecting for years eager to see for weeks will be released these days.

What kind of mov