Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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Hi Teachers, please help correct my article if there are any grammatical mistakes. many thanks.
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There are mainly two reasons the article recommend people to try tap water. Firstly,
tap water is not only economical and abundant but much cleaner than bottled water.
Secondly, artificial sweeter and chemical flavoring which is added to flavored water is
infinitely harmful to one’s health, in contrast, tap water seems better than it.
As the consumption of bottled water is increasing, many problems have arisen.
There is a growing tendency for some multination companies to purchase water
supplies, which makes local people suffer the water shortage from time to time. It is
reported that chemical could leak into the water from the plastic contain in storage,
what’s worse, there will be an environmental disaster if the plastic couldn’t be
recycled properly.
To take the place of bottled water, two free water coolers have been installed on
campus and the university is proved succeed in selling the re-usable water bottles.
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There are mainly two reasons the article recommend people to try tap water. Firstly,
tap water is not only economical and abundant but much cleaner than bottled water.
Secondly, artificial sweeter and chemical flavoring which is added to flavored water is
infinitely harmful to one’s health, in contrast, tap water seems better than it.
As the consumption of bottled water is increasing, many problems have arisen.
There is a growing tendency for some multination companies to purchase water
supplies, which makes local people suffer the water shortage from time to time. It is
reported that chemical could leak into the water from the plastic contain in storage,
what’s worse, there will be an environmental disaster if the plastic couldn’t be
recycled properly.
To take the place of bottled water, two free water coolers have been installed on
campus and the university is proved succeed in selling the re-usable water bottles.
Top answer
The article recommends two reasons as to why people should try tap water. Firstly, tap water is not only economical and abundant but also much cleaner than bottled water. Secondly, the artificial sweeteners and chemical flavorings which are added to flavored water are harmful to the consumer.
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The article recommends two reasons as to why people should try tap water.
Firstly, tap water is not only economical and abundant but also much cleaner than bottled water.
Secondly, the artificial sweeteners and chemical flavorings which are added to flavored water are
harmful to the consumer. Tap water does not contain such additives.
As the consumption of
Firstly, tap water is not only economical and abundant but also much cleaner than bottled water.
Secondly, the artificial sweeteners and chemical flavorings which are added to flavored water are
harmful to the consumer. Tap water does not contain such additives.
As the consumption of
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There are mainly two reasons the article recommends people drink to try tap water.
Firstly, tap water is not only economical and abundant, but much cleaner than bottled water. Secondly, artificial sweeteners and chemical flavorings whichis are added to flavored water is are infinitely harmful to one’s health.
Firstly, tap water is not only economical and abundant, but much cleaner than bottled water. Secondly, artificial sweeteners and chemical flavorings which
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Hi teechr
What about changing the highlighted part in blue to "some multinational companies purchase water supplies which result in water shortages"?
What about changing the highlighted part in blue to "some multinational companies purchase water supplies which result in water shortages"?
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