Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Problems with articulating.
Please check this sentence,
In 2009, I was appointed to represent X College in the Safe Cracking Competition,(which our team has built a safe to take part in the competition.)
Note: we will need to build a safe as well for other participants to crack, I don't know how to minimise the words used above, the version now is sooo redundant.
In 2009, I was appointed to represent X College in the Safe Cracking Competition,(which our team has built a safe to take part in the competition.)
Note: we will need to build a safe as well for other participants to crack, I don't know how to minimise the words used above, the version now is sooo redundant.
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) Note: we will need to build a safe as well for other participants to crack, I don't know how to minimise the words used above, the version now is sooo redundant. T his sounds like you were by yourself, and not on a team. I don't see how you can make it very short if you want to expalin how the contest works.
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Hi,
Please check this sentence,
In 2009, I was appointed to represent X College in the Safe Cracking Competition,(which our team has built a safe to take part in the competition.)
Note: we will need to build a safe as well for other participants to crack, I don't know how to minimise the words used above, the version now is soo
Please check this sentence,
In 2009, I was appointed to represent X College in the Safe Cracking Competition,(which our team has built a safe to take part in the competition.)
Note: we will need to build a safe as well for other participants to crack, I don't know how to minimise the words used above, the version now is soo
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