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Fire1 Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Preserve them in a good condition

A. I contend that the anxieties resulting from a compulsion to look after the good internal objects, to preserve them in a good condition.


Q1) Is sentence A correct English?

Q2) Does this prepositional phrase "in a good condition" modify this to-infinitive "to preserve"?


I'd say yes to both questions, but I'm not 100% clear.

  

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A. I contend that the anxieties resulting from a compulsion to look after the good internal objects, to preserve them in a good condition. Q1) Is sentence A correct English?

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A. I contend that the anxieties resulting from a compulsion to look after the good internal objects, to preserve them in a good condition.

Q1) Is sentence A correct English?

No.Your main clause is not complete.

Here is a complete sentence.

eg I contend that the anxieties resulting from a compulsion to look after the good internal objects

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fire1Q1) Is sentence A correct English?

No. There is no verb in the 'that' clause.

I contend that the anxieties [resulting from ...] ___?___.

What about the anxieties which result from those things? Nothing is said about them.