Naked chef Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Presenter's biography
Dear all,
I would like to organise the talk so I need to plan necessary things.
This is the biograpy of the presenter. Could you please check my English? and give me some better vocabulary than mine.
Thanks in advance
"The speaker's native town is Bago. He is Chinese and his religion is **. Although he has passed the matriculation exam with five distinctions which could join to Institute of Medicine, he missed that chance because of being Foreign Registration Card (FRC)holder at that time. So he took the English Language in Yangon University and he achieved the Degree of Honours in English in 19** His youth life was not so smooth and struggled too hard. His family's business is sewing which cannot provide enough for his whole family's expenditure. But he didn't suffer any depression , never gave up and tried to overcome the difficulties and ostacles to achieve his success in life and he eventually become a successful entrepreneur. Now he has been running his own business which is "** Training Centre where provide training services in Level I & II book-keeping & Accounts, Level II English for Business, Level III Accounting (IAS), Cost Accounting, Management Accounting, Business Statistics,Advanced Business Calculations, Computerized Accounting course and there are also special scholarship for excellent level III graduates for further route to ACCA. In addition, he produces smart and talent students from his training centre and they became teachers and could set up their own successful training centre around the country."
I would like to organise the talk so I need to plan necessary things.
This is the biograpy of the presenter. Could you please check my English? and give me some better vocabulary than mine.
Thanks in advance
"The speaker's native town is Bago. He is Chinese and his religion is **. Although he has passed the matriculation exam with five distinctions which could join to Institute of Medicine, he missed that chance because of being Foreign Registration Card (FRC)holder at that time. So he took the English Language in Yangon University and he achieved the Degree of Honours in English in 19** His youth life was not so smooth and struggled too hard. His family's business is sewing which cannot provide enough for his whole family's expenditure. But he didn't suffer any depression , never gave up and tried to overcome the difficulties and ostacles to achieve his success in life and he eventually become a successful entrepreneur. Now he has been running his own business which is "** Training Centre where provide training services in Level I & II book-keeping & Accounts, Level II English for Business, Level III Accounting (IAS), Cost Accounting, Management Accounting, Business Statistics,Advanced Business Calculations, Computerized Accounting course and there are also special scholarship for excellent level III graduates for further route to ACCA. In addition, he produces smart and talent students from his training centre and they became teachers and could set up their own successful training centre around the country."
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Dear Naked, I'll try and help you, but I need to know if the text is going to be spoken or if it is going to be printed. You mention that you are organizing a "talk". Is this going to be some sort of verbal introduction of the speaker to an audience or is it a written document that will be handed out to participants?
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Dear Naked,
I'll try and help you, but I need to know if the text is going to be spoken or if it is going to be printed.
You mention that you are organizing a "talk". Is this going to be some sort of verbal introduction of the speaker to an audience or is it a written document that will be handed out to participants?
Please advise,
John
I'll try and help you, but I need to know if the text is going to be spoken or if it is going to be printed.
You mention that you are organizing a "talk". Is this going to be some sort of verbal introduction of the speaker to an audience or is it a written document that will be handed out to participants?
Please advise,
John
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Dear John,
Sorry for my misleading letter.
I would like to organise the talk. So I've invited the presenter to give a talk to audience. So I am arranging for the announcement poster which I want to add the presenter's biography on the poster.
PS** I would like you to say "THANKS"for your kind help for my last post about "volunteer physician" ....it really work!!! We've
Sorry for my misleading letter.
I would like to organise the talk. So I've invited the presenter to give a talk to audience. So I am arranging for the announcement poster which I want to add the presenter's biography on the poster.
PS** I would like you to say "THANKS"for your kind help for my last post about "volunteer physician" ....it really work!!! We've
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Oh Naked Chef, I am so very pleased that you had 5 physicians volunteer for your project. Bravo.
Since this next task is going to be printed on a poster, it will be slightly different. What you want - I presume - is a sort of mini-CV that will also help entice the audience to come and listen to what the presenter has to say. A successful talk begins with a full house, right?
Since this next task is going to be printed on a poster, it will be slightly different. What you want - I presume - is a sort of mini-CV that will also help entice the audience to come and listen to what the presenter has to say. A successful talk begins with a full house, right?
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Dear John,
Thank you for your time and your priority to my business like the one of yours.
Sorry for my late reply as i am busy with other stuff in my office. I agree with you. I will contact you by email.
Best regards,
Naked Chef!
Thank you for your time and your priority to my business like the one of yours.
Sorry for my late reply as i am busy with other stuff in my office. I agree with you. I will contact you by email.
Best regards,
Naked Chef!
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