Poetry, have I written it properly

Hi there. can someone please sense-check?

The first word of each line of poetry must have a capital letter. Write out the following verse in lines:

When rooks go cawing across the sky, and clover-leaves fold in the fields near by, when lambs quite close to their mothers creep, it's time for me too, to go to sleep.

When rooks go cawing across the sky,
And clover-leaves fold in the fields near by,
When lambs quite close to their mothers creep,
It's time for me too, to go to sleep.

or

When rooks go cawing across the sky,
And clover-leaves fold in the fields near by,
When lambs quite close to their mothers creep,
It's time for me too,
To go to sleep.