Plz help me modify the following paragraph

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"For so many years I've always been a good liar to everyone I know, I can't come clean before them. They always force me to lie and hide my mistakes. Something about the truth that is not always welcomed."

Jessica Ojeda · Accepted Answer

Sashline"For so many years I've always been a good liar to everyone I know, I can't come clean before them. They always force me to lie and hide my mistakes. Something about the truth that is not always welcomed."

"For so many years I've always been a good liar to everyone I know..." Change this sentence to "I've been a good liar for so many years to everyone I know."

I took out "always" since you have "for so many years". It doesn't sound right to include them both. Choose one or the other.
The sentence must end at "know" to prevent a run-on sentence.
I put the most shocking information first because it read better that way to me. I liked hearing what you had been, and then just how long you had done it added the icing to the cake.

"I can't come clean before them." Change this sentence to "I can't come clean (to them)."

Take out "before them" because if you come clean then you'll be confessing before them. It's redundant. However, if you have to leave it in there use "to them". It sounds more natural like that to me.

"Something about the truth that is not always welcomed." Change to "That is something about the truth that is not always welcomed."

You need a subject and verb.

Plz help me modify the following paragraph

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