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Dear friends I recieved this letter from office that I applied for a MSc programme I have to convinced them my application is complete ..;could you pls help me

Thansk in advance

Dear Madam

On 3 January 2006 the office for International Scholars and Students
received your application for the Erasmus Mundus Master of .......

Unfortunately your application file is incomplete. Your application
will only be taken into consideration if you complete your file as
soon as possible.

You can complete your file in the following manner:

1) Please send us notarised copies of your diploma of Bachelor of
Science in Agricultural Engineering from Tabriz University and the
transcript of records that goes with it. "Notarised" means that the
diploma and transcript of records have to be authenticated by an
official authority in your country of nationality (...) or your
country of residence (Belgium), by the educational institution that
issued them or by a local Belgian diplomatic office. You have only
sent us normal copies.

2) Please send us a TOEFL

3) In your application form you mentioned that you are a Belgian
resident on the basis of family reunion living in Wilrijk. Please send
us a copy of your ID-card and/or residence permit.

If you have any questions do not hesitate to contact us.

Best regards.
Stephan

My answer to this e mail :

pls help me to correct this letter , i have to reply as soon as possible

Dear Sir

Many thanks for your message,about your requested documents :

1) I already applied for this programme last year but unfortunately I could not find any founding anyway I sent my original degree last year but this year i have just one original at the moment .Could I ask you if any possibility to find my document in office internatonal for my original if not I will send my original one as soon as possible.if you want you could contac with Dr.Borry who knows more about my application .

2) as I mentioned in my application form that 10 years of my education was in English (sencodary school and university) ,beside I attended lot of language courses.I found this would be exception in Erasmus Mundus Programme

3) My husband is studying here i am here because of him ,i don't study or either work.I will send you my belgium id-card via email.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards

shirin

Philologist · Accepted Answer

AnonymousDear Sir

Many thanks for your message. As to the requested documents :

1) I already applied for this programme last year, but unfortunately I could not find any founding. At any rate, I sent my original degree last year. Presently, I only have the original (You sent them your original degree last year yet you still have it?). Could I ask you whether it would be possible to find my document in the International Office? If not, I will send my original one as soon as possible. If you wish to, you could contact Dr. Borry, who knows more about my application .

2) As I mentioned in my application form, 10 years of my education was in English (secondary school and university). Besides, I've attended lot of language courses. I believed that I would be exempt from the TOEFL requirement.

3) I will send you my Belgian ID-card via email.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards

shirin

Anonymous · Answer

Dear Philologist

Many thanks for your help and comments ,it helped me alots

I need your kind help again pls

saba

I have been asked for original degree, I still have one but if I send it I dont have any more to apply anywhere else just in case.

Also in my relpy to this letter in question 1) I wanted to say my original degree is in English it is not translated ,the document which I sent it to you it is copy of my original not copy of my translated document.

Anonymous · Answer

0Subject : Your contract with SAIL Warehouse, Bangalore for operation maintenace fo Electrical installation02br
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00Ref: Meeting held with you at our Regional office at RO/Chennai on 5th January 2007 and 3rd October 200602br
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001) Manpower Deployment02br
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00As already beeb pointed out to you on several occasions in the past mapower deployment is not adequate as per tender terms. in fact it is less than even what you had indicted to us in the meeting. No helper has been posted02br
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002) Clarifications regarding ESI, labour licence, compliance with shops & Establishment Act.,02br
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00In the meeting you had committed to comply with these before 25th January 2007, however even till date you have not completed these formalities as commited by you an as required as per tender terms.02br
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003) You had committed that the copy of receipt of the wages will be furnished along with the bill. this has not been done till date.02br
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004) The oil filtering of the transformer was to be done by you before 31st January 2007. Till date job has not been undertaken by you and no communication has been received from you regarding plan of takin up the job02br
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005) you were to depute qualified and experience ("C" certificate holder representative to visit the warehouse on reqular basis to monitor the electrical works with effect from 1st january 2007. this also has been complied with from your end02br
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006) As per tender terms for subject work you were required to deposit an amount equivalent to three month contract value as per the rate finalized in this tender as security deposit Upon award of work. the EMD amount of Rs. 7500/- collected has been adjusted toward this security deposit. you have made an additional deposit of only Rs. 27000/- towards security deposit. you had to make a further deposit of Rs 46,500/- towards security Deposit by 25th January 2007 latest, which was brought to your notice vide our letter dated 22nd January 2007. You were sent a reminder again on 25th January 2007. But till date you have not deposited the balance amont towards security deposit.02br
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00we are left with no other option but to recover the same partly from the payments due to you from the AMC charges bill submitted by you for December 2006, and balance will be recovered from payments due against subsequent bills that may be raised by you towards monthly AMC charges.02br
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00The above may kindly be noted by you and pending issues illustated above as committed by you during held with you on 3rd October 2006 as wekk as 5th JAnuary 2007, as per contract terms, may be accorded utmost priority from your end and the same may be complied with without any further delay0-

Kasthuri · Answer

0with reffernce to the above we letter we are not in the position to pay the security deposit equal to three monthly payment. Our over head and salary & other expenses are high. Your goodself given the Letter of Indent, asked us to pay the one month payment which we already paid. If you instruct us regarding this before taking over the Amnnual maintenace contract we may left this job. More over we are not in the position to serve your premises. kindly do the needful. thanking you02br
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00your faithfully,02br
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00For balaji Electric Woks0-

Kasthuri · Answer

0with reffernce to the above we letter we are not in the position to pay the security deposit equal to three monthly payment. Our over head and salary & other expenses are high. Your goodself given the Letter of Indent, asked us to pay the one month payment which we already paid. If you instruct us regarding this before taking over the Amnnual maintenace contract we may left this job. More over we are not in the position to serve your premises. kindly do the needful. thanking you02br
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00your faithfully,02br
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00For balaji Electric Woks0-

Kasthuri · Answer

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01cite10Anonymous12cite10Subject : Your contract with SAIL Warehouse, Bangalore for operation maintenace fo Electrical installation12br
12br
10Ref: Meeting held with you at our Regional office at RO/Chennai on 5th January 2007 and 3rd October 200612br
12br
101) Manpower Deployment12br
12br
10As already beeb pointed out to you on several occasions in the past mapower deployment is not adequate as per tender terms. in fact it is less than even what you had indicted to us in the meeting. No helper has been posted12br
12br
102) Clarifications regarding ESI, labour licence, compliance with shops & Establishment Act.,12br
12br
10In the meeting you had committed to comply with these before 25th January 2007, however even till date you have not completed these formalities as commited by you an as required as per tender terms.12br
12br
103) You had committed that the copy of receipt of the wages will be furnished along with the bill. this has not been done till date.12br
12br
104) The oil filtering of the transformer was to be done by you before 31st January 2007. Till date job has not been undertaken by you and no communication has been received from you regarding plan of takin up the job12br
12br
105) you were to depute qualified and experience ("C" certificate holder representative to visit the warehouse on reqular basis to monitor the electrical works with effect from 1st january 2007. this also has been complied with from your end12br
12br
106) As per tender terms for subject work you were required to deposit an amount equivalent to three month contract value as per the rate finalized in this tender as security deposit Upon award of work. the EMD amount of Rs. 7500/- collected has been adjusted toward this security deposit. you have made an additional deposit of only Rs. 27000/- towards security deposit. you had to make a further deposit of Rs 46,500/- towards security Deposit by 25th January 2007 latest, which was brought to your notice vide our letter dated 22nd January 2007. You were sent a reminder again on 25th January 2007. But till date you have not deposited the balance amont towards security deposit.12br
12br
10we are left with no other option but to recover the same partly from the payments due to you from the AMC charges bill submitted by you for December 2006, and balance will be recovered from payments due against subsequent bills that may be raised by you towards monthly AMC charges.12br
12br
10The above may kindly be noted by you and pending issues illustated above as committed by you during held with you on 3rd October 2006 as wekk as 5th JAnuary 2007, as per contract terms, may be accorded utmost priority from your end and the same may be complied with without any further delay12br
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