Pls check my poem,thank you.

The special poem “strong”was written for those man who lost their family in the earthquake last year.



Dear wife,how kind you are! I like to look at you make up in the mirror and have the soup you made.

Lovely kid,how strong you are! I want to take you to the school and listen to your songs attentively.

Why do you go in a hurry,the house became quiet at once.My hair got white in a night.

I can’t help recalling your appearance.The photos feel cold to touch it,and hot tears pour down my face.

I look at the people in the street,but can’t find the direction to the home.

I always imagine that you are still alive,for there is hope in the life as long as we are together.

I can see the sun in the east.I must become stronger and stronger.