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0I wrote a essay, could someone check it? Topic: unversities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?02br
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00There are numerous debates about the issue whether or not accept equal number of male and female students at school.Therefore some people suggect that every subject should have balanced number of different gendar. In my opinion, it should not be obeyed as a rule because some factors are more important than gaining balanced number of both gendar.02br
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00There is no doubt that the equal both gendar studnets in the same class tend to complement each other both physically and psychologically ,bringing their talents and strengeths into soceity. This situation is centainly benefit for primary school untill high school as well as improving each other corporation. But university provides students to learn profeesional skills and knowledge as not as the element of learning , in order to using their future. Therfore, university policise should spotlight a varity of useful books and the supply of teachers.02br
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00The second consideration of not balanced both gendar in every subject is that some subects such as aorplane engine fixing and history studying are more popluar in specific gendar.If universities want to enrol more, the target is after all beyond shools' reach.As a result , some students are forced to choose an interested subject and special subjects might lose chances to educate higher skill students.02br
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00In conclusion, even balanced both gendar in each subjcet has signifiacnt benefit, when considering bachelor's degress is not as same as primary school. University should fouce on how to develop student capability in increasing our life.02br
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00 Pls check it and teaching my conclusion Thank a lot0-