Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Here my answer to an employer request. I had an interview with him, informed him that I'm not available right now, however, I would be very plaised to inform them as soon as I finish my degree
and would be plaised to work for them.
Would you check this letter, comment or add/delete as necessary, enrich/extend the text.
Thank for your appreciable help!!
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Dear XY,
Following the telephone interview of 31 auguest 2007, I would be very plaised to send you here attached an updated copy of my C.V.
I went through your company website and I found the positions offered very interesting
As I mentioned in the interview, I am attending a Pre-MBA Course here in London, and I will be plaised to let you know when I will be available as soon as possible.
Youres sincerely,
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Please, would you help on my feedback to an employer
Here my answer to an employer request. I had an interview with him, informed him that I'm not available right now, however, I would be very plaised to inform them as soon as I finish my degree
and would be plaised to work for them.
Would you check this letter, comment or add/delete as necessary, enrich/extend the text.
Thank for your appreciable help!!
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Dear XY,
Following the telephone interview of 31 auguest 2007, I would be very plaised to send you here attached an updated copy of my C.V.
I went through your company website and I found the positions offered very interesting
As I mentioned in the interview, I am attending a Pre-MBA Course here in London, and I will be plaised to let you know when I will be available as soon as possible.
Youres sincerely,
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Top answer
Letter's mostly ok but don't you have a spell-check on your computer? V. I went through your company website and I found the positions offered very interesting As I mentioned in the interview, I am attending a Pre-MBA Course here in London, and I will be plaised to let you know when I will be available as soon as possible.
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Letter's mostly ok but don't you have a spell-check on your computer?
Dear XY,
Following my telephone interview of 31 August 2007, I am very pleased to send you
Dear XY,
Following my telephone interview of 31 August 2007, I am very pleased to send you
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