Nimc2002 Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing
Please reword these sentences....and make it less clumsy
I am writing to express interest in securing an internship position as a
“position name” in your company, in response to your job posting on the website name. The advertised position and company’s profile are an excellent match with my skills. I am currently pursuing my second year of Masters in Business Administration from EMLYON, “a triple accredited” French university. I have a strong desire to work in the “industry name” and an especially attracted to “company name” as it is a forward looking company with an ever expanding international profile, I find that it will be an honour to start my career with “”company name”.
PS: its for a European company they like courtesy alot!
“position name” in your company, in response to your job posting on the website name. The advertised position and company’s profile are an excellent match with my skills. I am currently pursuing my second year of Masters in Business Administration from EMLYON, “a triple accredited” French university. I have a strong desire to work in the “industry name” and an especially attracted to “company name” as it is a forward looking company with an ever expanding international profile, I find that it will be an honour to start my career with “”company name”.
PS: its for a European company they like courtesy alot!
Top answer
nimc2002 its for a European company they like courtesy alot! There is a difference between courtesy and flattery.
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nimc2002 its for a European company they like courtesy alot!There is a difference between courtesy and flattery.
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