EnglishNoGood Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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Appreciate if someone could take a look at this short passage. Any comments to improve the sentences are most welcome.
Soaring fantastically and bristling with energy against the backdrop of Rocky Mountain range, Frederic C. Hamilton Building is the the newest extension to the Denver Art Museum. Designed by one of foremost creator of intriguing architectural compositions, Daniel Libeskind (b.1946), the extension is his first finished building in the U.S. Opened to the public in October 2006 at a total cost of over 62 million dollars, the extension houses some of the world's finest modern and contemporary art collections, including the collection of architecture and design and Oceanic art.
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ENG
Soaring fantastically and bristling with energy against the backdrop of Rocky Mountain range, Frederic C. Hamilton Building is the the newest extension to the Denver Art Museum. Designed by one of foremost creator of intriguing architectural compositions, Daniel Libeskind (b.1946), the extension is his first finished building in the U.S. Opened to the public in October 2006 at a total cost of over 62 million dollars, the extension houses some of the world's finest modern and contemporary art collections, including the collection of architecture and design and Oceanic art.
Regards,
ENG
Top answer
Hi, Pleaase read carefully, I've suggested a few changes. Soaring fantastically and bristling with energy against the backdrop of the Rocky Mountain range, the Frederic C. Hamilton Building is the the newest extension to the Denver Art Museum.
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Hi,
Pleaase read carefully, I've suggested a few changes.
Soaring fantastically and bristling with energy against the backdrop of the Rocky Mountain range, the Frederic C. Hamilton Building is the the newest extension to the Denver Art Museum. Designed by one of the foremost creators of intriguing architectural compositions, Daniel Libeskind (b.1946), the ex
Pleaase read carefully, I've suggested a few changes.
Soaring fantastically and bristling with energy against the backdrop of the Rocky Mountain range, the Frederic C. Hamilton Building is the the newest extension to the Denver Art Museum. Designed by one of the foremost creators of intriguing architectural compositions, Daniel Libeskind (b.1946), the ex
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