Trouper Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Please proofread my writing
0 Dear members, 02 br
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00 We are a team of students from Singapore national university have chosen your company, 01 b 00 Singapore Automobiles 02 b 00 to participate in the Online Marketing Challenge. With your cooperation, our team Empressrio will develop a free online marketing campaign by using AdWords to drive traffic to your website. Our team consist of 5 students from first year to final year students. Below is the details for our team members. 02 br
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00 We decided to advertise your company offical website which is the 01 b 00 Singapore automobiles. 02 b 00 We really hope that your company would consider our request in order to help you improve your online presence and getting more recognition of your hotel locally and internationally. 02 br
00 Besides, we also seek your support and advise that will help us to win the competition. 02 br
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00 We anticipate a positive feedback from the Corporate Department in order for us to proceed with the challenge. Do not hasitate to contact me Javavid sing 02 br
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00 Yours Sincerely, 0-
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00 First paragapgh: 02 br
00 We are a team of students from Singapore national university have chosen your company, 01 b 00 Singapore Automobiles 02 b 00 to participate in the Online Marketing Challenge. With your cooperation, our team Empressrio will develop a free online marketing campaign by using AdWords to drive traffic to your website. Our team consist of 5 students from first year to final year students. Below is the details for our team members. 02 br
00 Second para: 02 br
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00 We decided to advertise your company offical website which is the 01 b 00 Singapore automobiles. 02 b 00 We really hope that your company would consider our request in order to help you improve your online presence and getting more recognition of your hotel locally and internationally. 02 br
00 Besides, we also seek your support and advise that will help us to win the competition. 02 br
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00 We anticipate a positive feedback from the Corporate Department in order for us to proceed with the challenge. Do not hasitate to contact me Javavid sing 02 br
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00 Yours Sincerely, 0-
Top answer
0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 01 font 01 b 00 We really hope that your company would consider our request 02 b 02 font 02 br 02 br 00 My first quick impression is that it's not clear to me what your request is. Are you simply asking for their permission to do this? Will you submit your plans to them for their approval?
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0 Hi, 02 br
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01 font 01 b 00 We really hope that your company would consider our request 02 b 02 font 02 br
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00 My first quick impression is that it's not clear to me what your request is. Are you simply asking for their permission to do this? Will you submit your plans to them for their approval? You need to m
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01 font 01 b 00 We really hope that your company would consider our request 02 b 02 font 02 br
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00 My first quick impression is that it's not clear to me what your request is. Are you simply asking for their permission to do this? Will you submit your plans to them for their approval? You need to m
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0 Dear clive, 02 br
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00 Yeah we are actually looking for a company to work with promote their new business through online marketing campaign. We want to know whether they are interested to work with us. 0-
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00 Yeah we are actually looking for a company to work with promote their new business through online marketing campaign. We want to know whether they are interested to work with us. 0-
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0 Hi, 02 br
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00 Then in your letter you need to ask them whether they are interested in working with you. You need to explain why they should say 'Yes'. You also need to make clear what you want them to do, and how much of their time you will require. 02 br
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00 As I suggested, why don't you revise your letter and post it here again for our further comm
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00 Then in your letter you need to ask them whether they are interested in working with you. You need to explain why they should say 'Yes'. You also need to make clear what you want them to do, and how much of their time you will require. 02 br
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00 As I suggested, why don't you revise your letter and post it here again for our further comm
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0 Dear clive, 02 br
00 Thanks for the suggestion; I followed it and modified in a way that answered your questions above. I showed the modified letter to a prof and He corrected some mistakes. 02 br
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00 Thanks once again! 02 br
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00 peace, love and health 02 br
00 Trouper 0-
00 Thanks for the suggestion; I followed it and modified in a way that answered your questions above. I showed the modified letter to a prof and He corrected some mistakes. 02 br
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00 Thanks once again! 02 br
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00 peace, love and health 02 br
00 Trouper 0-
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