Please kindly help me revise my cover letter

I would like to apply a job in marketing field but I did not finish directly in marketing but I have some knowledge of marketing.

Pleases help me about these,your all suggestion is a valuable.

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bkk

HR Department

ABB Company

bkk

Dear Sir,



I am writing this letter to apply for the marketing Executive position in response to your advertisement in Jobsdb.com.



I graduated from HK University and hold a bachelors degree from the faculty of Economics, with a major in Business Economics. I then challenged myself with my own Chiness Food business. This gave me a great opportunity to enhance my entrepreneurship.I have learned a real business, including marketing and sales, problem solving and dealing with department store.



In addition, marketing is my interest. I have learned a great deal about marketing methodologies through reading various marketing books. I am able to implement a marketing plan.

I believe that my experience, commercial sense and analytical skill would make me a excellent candidates.



An opportunity to discuss my abilities and skills and how I can help your company would be most welcome. I appreciate your consideration and look forward to meeting you.



Yours faithfully,







Enclosure: Resume