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The casualties due to the protests in Syria go on increasing. The number of killed people has been assesed at 2,700 by the UN since the beginning of the riots in Deraa last March. The corpses which has been returned to kin give evidence that of being tortured in the jails of the regime. Last Friday, Amnesty International revealed the case of a 18-year old girl, Zainab, from the city of Homs. The mutilated body has been recognized by her parents who had gone to the mortuary prior to identify their killed son, Mohammed. Six months after the beginning of the protest, many footages slip through the narrow net of the regime, including through the relay Facebook groups like The Syrian Revolution 2011.
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The casualties due to the protests in Syria go on increasing. The number of killed people has been assesed at 2,700 by the UN since the beginning of the riots in Deraa last March. The corpses which has been returned to kin give evidence that of being tortured in the jails of the regime. Last Friday, Amnesty International revealed the case of a 18-year old girl, Zainab, from the city of Homs. The mutilated body has been recognized by her parents who had gone to the mortuary prior to identify their killed son, Mohammed. Six months after the beginning of the protest, many footages slip through the narrow net of the regime, including through the relay Facebook groups like The Syrian Revolution 2011.
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The casualties due to the protests in Syria go on increasing. The number of dead has been assessed at 2,700 by the UN since the beginning of the riots in Deraa last March. The bodies which have been returned to kin give evidence of being tortured in the jails of the regime.
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The casualties due to the protests in Syria go on increasing. The number of dead has been assessed at 2,700 by the UN since the beginning of the riots in Deraa last March. The bodies which have been returned to kin give evidenc
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