Ssmm Posted 20 years ago
Business & Finance
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Please give me comment, I am learning how to write a formal email.
Dear XXX,
I would like to introduce myself as the new coordinator to take up the role from xxx. According to xxxx you are one of our valuable partner with us. I have tried to contact you to see if we can organise some courses after Nov., perhaps in Jan, however, you are on leave for this week. I sincerely hope that we can dissucss the future plan sometime next week in person. But I will be on leave until Nov.15 Wed., would it be fixed the meeting on next Thur., 2:30pm. at your office. Please confirm if you will be fine or have another suggestion.
Thank you for your attention and I look forward to co-organise more courses with you in the future.
Dear XXX,
I would like to introduce myself as the new coordinator to take up the role from xxx. According to xxxx you are one of our valuable partner with us. I have tried to contact you to see if we can organise some courses after Nov., perhaps in Jan, however, you are on leave for this week. I sincerely hope that we can dissucss the future plan sometime next week in person. But I will be on leave until Nov.15 Wed., would it be fixed the meeting on next Thur., 2:30pm. at your office. Please confirm if you will be fine or have another suggestion.
Thank you for your attention and I look forward to co-organise more courses with you in the future.
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I would like to introduce myself as the new coordinator . I have taken over the role from ***. *** informs/has informed me that you are one of our most valued partners .
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I would like to introduce myself as the new coordinator. I have taken over the role from ***. *** informs/has informed me that you are one of our most valued partners. I tried to contact you to see if we can organise some courses after Nov. - perhaps in
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