Alesandra1984 Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
Please Help, thanks :) its my application for master course
0 Hello All! 02 br
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00 I am writing a motivation letter for applying a fashion master course. 02 br
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00 I am not a native english speaker. I think the words I used are too complicated and not fluent. 02 br
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00 Could anyone give me a help please?? 02 br
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00 Thanks so much 05 0 02 br
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00 Sandra 02 br
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00 Dear Sir or Madam, 02 br
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00 I am writing to apply for the postgraduate program of fashion design in XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 00 . 02 br
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00 I am very interested in the program that I found the modules are fundamental and well planned which 02 br
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00 are extremely useful for being a designer today. No need to mention that XXX is a prestigious fashion 02 br
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00 institute in the fashion capital of its reputation of excellent quality and the heritage of craftsmanship. 02 br
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00 Under the supervision of experienced working professionals and relations within the industry, I am 02 br
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00 certain that I would be able to propel myself to the height of my career and further develop my skills 02 br
00 and knowledge in this profession. 00 02 br
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00 Choosing fashion as my career has never been a quick decision but under a great passion and 02 br
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00 enthusiasm that I had developed since I was at very young age. After finished my A-Level and 02 br
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00 short courses in fashion design in Hong Kong, I arrived in the UK where I had done the BA (Hons) 02 br
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00 Fashion Design in the University of XXXXXXXXXX. Then 00 I was working as an assistant designer 02 br
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00 for a luxury label in Hong Kong specialized in eveningswear 00 and bridalswear where I have developed 02 br
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00 my specialized skills in bias cut draping, embroidery, 00 beading and how to work closely with the 02 br
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00 design director in order to develop a collection and to 00 maintain high standard of quality. 02 br
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00 Last year I attended a BAC 00 Paris where I have 02 br
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00 learnt more about the French fashion culture and 00 production. I have been doing several internships 02 br
00 as a design and production assistant during my 00 study in Paris. 00 02 br
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00 To be a fashion designer and develop my own business are my career goal. For a time, I was 02 br
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00 uncertain of my career path that how can I achieve my goal. I found out that even with hard 02 br
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00 working and enthusiasm would not be enough for success but also I need to know where that I 02 br
02 br
00 want to go and how that I want to go. I found that a designer today is no longer just a designer 02 br
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00 to create an innovative designs but also a manager and a art director with a high understanding 02 br
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00 in brand management and in a commercial and financial aspect. I would like to attend this 02 br
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00 postgraduate programme that I believe I can do more and develop these kinds of skills that I have 02 br
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00 lacked. It is my intent to expand my skills and knowledge to attain success in my profession. I am 02 br
00 certain that the course will boost my career and propel myself to another height. 00 00 Thank you very much for your time and your consideration. 00 02 br
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00 Yours faithfully, 00 02 br
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00 Sandra 00 010id 1
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00 I am writing a motivation letter for applying a fashion master course. 02 br
02 br
00 I am not a native english speaker. I think the words I used are too complicated and not fluent. 02 br
02 br
00 Could anyone give me a help please?? 02 br
02 br
00 Thanks so much 05 0 02 br
02 br
00 Sandra 02 br
02 br
00 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 02 br
00 Dear Sir or Madam, 02 br
02 br
00 I am writing to apply for the postgraduate program of fashion design in XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 00 . 02 br
02 br
00 I am very interested in the program that I found the modules are fundamental and well planned which 02 br
02 br
00 are extremely useful for being a designer today. No need to mention that XXX is a prestigious fashion 02 br
02 br
00 institute in the fashion capital of its reputation of excellent quality and the heritage of craftsmanship. 02 br
02 br
00 Under the supervision of experienced working professionals and relations within the industry, I am 02 br
02 br
00 certain that I would be able to propel myself to the height of my career and further develop my skills 02 br
00 and knowledge in this profession. 00 02 br
02 br
00 Choosing fashion as my career has never been a quick decision but under a great passion and 02 br
02 br
00 enthusiasm that I had developed since I was at very young age. After finished my A-Level and 02 br
02 br
00 short courses in fashion design in Hong Kong, I arrived in the UK where I had done the BA (Hons) 02 br
02 br
00 Fashion Design in the University of XXXXXXXXXX. Then 00 I was working as an assistant designer 02 br
02 br
00 for a luxury label in Hong Kong specialized in eveningswear 00 and bridalswear where I have developed 02 br
02 br
00 my specialized skills in bias cut draping, embroidery, 00 beading and how to work closely with the 02 br
02 br
00 design director in order to develop a collection and to 00 maintain high standard of quality. 02 br
02 br
00 Last year I attended a BAC 00 Paris where I have 02 br
02 br
00 learnt more about the French fashion culture and 00 production. I have been doing several internships 02 br
00 as a design and production assistant during my 00 study in Paris. 00 02 br
02 br
00 To be a fashion designer and develop my own business are my career goal. For a time, I was 02 br
02 br
00 uncertain of my career path that how can I achieve my goal. I found out that even with hard 02 br
02 br
00 working and enthusiasm would not be enough for success but also I need to know where that I 02 br
02 br
00 want to go and how that I want to go. I found that a designer today is no longer just a designer 02 br
02 br
00 to create an innovative designs but also a manager and a art director with a high understanding 02 br
02 br
00 in brand management and in a commercial and financial aspect. I would like to attend this 02 br
02 br
00 postgraduate programme that I believe I can do more and develop these kinds of skills that I have 02 br
02 br
00 lacked. It is my intent to expand my skills and knowledge to attain success in my profession. I am 02 br
00 certain that the course will boost my career and propel myself to another height. 00 00 Thank you very much for your time and your consideration. 00 02 br
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00 Yours faithfully, 00 02 br
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00 Sandra 00 010id 1
Top answer
02 br 02 br 00 I don't know if this is a good idea or not, but perhaps it's not a bad idea, after your very first sentence, to start your letter with an acknowledgement that English is not your first language, rather than having someone else make it perfect English. courses? Does the catalog really list "modules"?
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0 Hi Sandra, and welcome to the forums. 02 br
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00 I don't know if this is a good idea or not, but perhaps it's not a bad idea, after your very first sentence, to start your letter with an acknowledgement that English is not your first language, rather than having someone else make it perfect English. Something like "English is not my first language, so I must hope that the wo
02 br
00 I don't know if this is a good idea or not, but perhaps it's not a bad idea, after your very first sentence, to start your letter with an acknowledgement that English is not your first language, rather than having someone else make it perfect English. Something like "English is not my first language, so I must hope that the wo
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0 Dear Sir or Madam, 02 br
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00 I am writing to apply for the postgraduate program of fashion design in *** 00 . 02 br
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00 I am very interested in the program. I find the modules fundamental and well planned, which w 00 ill be extremely useful. I believe that *** is a prestigious fashion 02 br
02 br
00 institute in the fashion capita
02 br
00 I am writing to apply for the postgraduate program of fashion design in *** 00 . 02 br
02 br
00 I am very interested in the program. I find the modules fundamental and well planned, which w 00 ill be extremely useful. I believe that *** is a prestigious fashion 02 br
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00 institute in the fashion capita
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