MUSCOVITE Posted 16 years ago
Vocabulary
Please help refine thewording
Hi,
(1) The topmost session bar describes the 'common data interval' that is formed by the individual point occupations intersecting each other
(2) The topmost session bar describes the 'common data interval' that results from the individual point occupations intersecting each other.
(3) The topmost session bar describes the 'common data interval', that is the interval formed by the individual point occupations intersecting each other.
I guess the idea is clear enough to everyone,... but the wording is bad?
If you could help me polish up these clumsy versions?
Thanks,
muscoivite
(1) The topmost session bar describes the 'common data interval' that is formed by the individual point occupations intersecting each other
(2) The topmost session bar describes the 'common data interval' that results from the individual point occupations intersecting each other.
(3) The topmost session bar describes the 'common data interval', that is the interval formed by the individual point occupations intersecting each other.
I guess the idea is clear enough to everyone,... but the wording is bad?
If you could help me polish up these clumsy versions?
Thanks,
muscoivite
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MUSCOVITE I guess the idea is clear enough to everyone Hmm. Not to me I'm afraid. I've no clue what it means!
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MUSCOVITEI guess the idea is clear enough to everyone
Hmm. Not to me I'm afraid. I've no clue what it means! What is a "session bar"? What are "point occupations"? Are these standard terms in some field?
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