Kevinyuyi Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
please help me to choose a better one
The follows will be a broadcast during a Exhibition, can anyone can help me to choose a better one, or correct these. thanks
Notice
Attentions please: During the exhibition, please take care of your personal belongings and your expensive equipments. Smoking is prohibited on the site, and also please don’t use open fire. Thanks for your support.
Attention please: For your own security, please keep all personal possessions and valuable items on your person at all times. Smoking is prohibited on the site, and please don't use open fire, thanks for your support.
Notice
Attentions please: During the exhibition, please take care of your personal belongings and your expensive equipments. Smoking is prohibited on the site, and also please don’t use open fire. Thanks for your support.
Attention please: For your own security, please keep all personal possessions and valuable items on your person at all times. Smoking is prohibited on the site, and please don't use open fire, thanks for your support.
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Notice Attention please: During the exhibition, please safeguard your personal belongings and valuables . Smoking is prohibited on the site, and also please don’t use open fire. Thanks for your support.
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Notice
Attention please: During the exhibition, please safeguard your personal belongings and valuables. Smoking is prohibited on the site, and also please don’t use open fire. Thanks for your support.
Attention please: For your own security, please keep all personal possessions and valuable items on your person at all times. Smoking is prohibited on t
Attention please: During the exhibition, please safeguard your personal belongings and valuables. Smoking is prohibited on the site, and also please don’t use open fire. Thanks for your support.
Attention please: For your own security, please keep all personal possessions and valuable items on your person at all times. Smoking is prohibited on t
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