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The given chart illustrates the yearly GDP growth rate in three different countries namely Tunisia, Japan, Ecuador from 2007 to 2010.
Overall, it is obvious that there was a significantly rise in the annual GDP growth in Japan, while the opposite was true for that in Tunisia and Japan.
In 2007, the percentage of GDP growth in Tunisia declined steadily, was double than that in 2010. Besides, the figure for GDP growth in Ecuador has constantly changed over the period shown, that was grow in 2008 and had a downward trend in two years after.
On the other hand, there was a dramatically increase in the proportion of the annual GDP growth. This rise was remarkably considerable between 2007 and 2010. It is also noticeable that the figure for GDP growth in Japan was reach a peak in 2010, three times and twice as much as in Tunisia, Ecuador respectively.
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eunwoosssiii The given chart illustrates the yearly GDP growth rate in three different countries namely Tunisia, Japan, Ecuador from 2007 to 2010. The given (Do not use "given" or "provided". ) the yearly GDP growth rate in three different countries namely Tunisia, Japan, Ecuador from 2007 to 2010.
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eunwoosssiiiThe given chart illustrates the yearly GDP growth rate in three different countries namely Tunisia, Japan, Ecuador from 2007 to 2010.
The given (Do not use "given" or "provided". Write the type of chart.) chart illustrates (wrong word - use illustrate for diagrams, processes and
0Overall, it is obvious that ("Obvious" is an opinion word. Do not write opinions in Task 1) there was a significantly (wrong form. An adverb does not modify a noun.) rise in the annual GDP growth rate in Japan, while the opposite was true for that in Tunisia and Japan.
0In 2007, the percentage of (Wrong phrase. The values are not percentage of growth, but the growth) GDP growth rate in Tunisia declined steadily, (Wrong description. The bar chart does now show what happened during 2007, e.g. January, February... December)
0Here are two more sentences for the "detail" paragraph.
Ecuador showed an erratic pattern, with its GDP growth rate varying between just over 1% in 2009 and nearly 5% in 2008.
The average GDP growth rates during this period were 4% for Tunisia and Japan, and 2.8% for Ecuador.
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