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Mezzopiano Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please help me correct this email. thank you.

From now on, can I come on Fridays and Saturdays, 3:30-5 (I may come earlier but Jacob can start whenever he wants)? I want to separate the study time so he can better concentrate. It is still $40 for two days.

  

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From now on, can I come on Fridays and Saturdays, 3:30-5 ? I may come earlier but Jacob can start whenever he wants. I want to separate our study time so he can better concentrate...

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From now on, can I come on Fridays and Saturdays, 3:30-5? I may come earlier but Jacob can start whenever he wants. I want to separate our study time so he can better concentrate...

This grammar is OK, as edited above. But it will confuse the reader about the time you will come.