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Guest Posted 23 years ago
Grammar

Please help: Jetlagged

1) I learned some new vocabulary and formed this sentence:
Despite explicitly mentioning to you in advance, to hold the package for me, it was returned to the sender.

2) Jetlagged in an adjective. Can it be used this way: Do you feel jetlagged?
Are you jetlagged?

Please help me correct all the above sentences. I'm just a beginner. Thanks in advance.
  

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Number 1 is okay for informal usage. ". Number 2 is fine.

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Number 1 is okay for informal usage. Formal would require that it be "Despite my explicitly mentioning to you ...".

Number 2 is fine.



Cheers

John.
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Ditch the first comma in #1. And you need the "my", no matter what. First because the sentence is already formal, and second because without the "my", you'd be suggesting that the package did the mentioning.